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XxBeewhiskerxX
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Who

Clovershine and Dazzlpaw

What

Training thread!

Where

Open Lands

Day

17

Even in the darkest shadows, there is always a glimmer of light. We just have to look for it.

✧・゚: *✧・゚:* 🍀 *:・゚✧*:・゚✧

The sun was high in the sky, warming the floor as Clovershine padded into a clearing with her son, her apprentice, Dazzlepaw, close to her heels. The bright eyed she-cat turned to face with an encouraging smile, her blue eyes glimmering with her usual excitement. She loved coming out here and training Dazzlepaw, he had been her first apprentice and it was such an experience to gain, for both of them, as she was learning as much from him as he was learning from her, and she loved the bond the two began to share. Though she did seem a little upset that she couldn’t see her other kits as much as she used to, but they were not in the nursery anymore, but that was how it was, who was Clovershine to argue.

"Alright Dazzlepaw" She began, her voice light but firm "Today’s going to be a mix of two lessons. We’ll be starting with some practical hunting as usual, you’ll be providing something for the elders today. After that, we’ll work on protecting your vulnerable areas of your body in battle. Even the best fighters need to know how to stay safe right?" she mewed playfully, giving her tail a playful flick.

Though she did pause to let Dazzlepaw process her words, before motioning him to follow as she lead him towards a shady part of the open land. "Now, you’ve got the basics of hunting down, but our territory has a way of throwing surprises at us. So, we’re going to focus on working with what’s around you" Clovershine explained, leaving another gap between her words to make sure Dazzlepaw took in the information she was explaining to him. "Fallen leaves, stray twigs, they all make noise if you’re not careful. Remember, prey have sharp ears and even sharper noses, so if they hear you or smell you, that is a precious resource lost" she meowed, a hint of seriousness in her tone, she wanted to get it across that hunting was important, incredibly so in fact.

She stopped, flicking her tail to a cluster of bushes where the scent of a mouse linger faintly. "Let’s see how quiet you can be. Show me how you’d stalk something here, pretend I’m not even watching you" she echoed before limping away calmly into a more shaded area, though her pale pelt could still be seen even cloaked in shadow.

Bee's Characters
FROM WINDCLAN
Beewhisker - ⚧ Chirpy Queen
Sunbear - ♀ Blunt Elder
Basilflame - ♀ Polite Warrior
FROM THUNDERCLAN
Greypebbles - ♂ Quiet Warrior
Robinkit - ♀ Cautious Kit
FROM SHADOWCLAN
Clovershine - ♀ Optimistic Warrior
Wolfkit - ♂ Odd kit
FROM RIVERCLAN
Goosesong - ♂ Stoic Warrior
Lilyriver - ♀ Independent Elder
OUTSIDERS
Duchess ♀ - Friendly Semi-Feral


   
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bookazuu
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Dazzlepaw bounded happily after his mother, tail stuck up behind him, still making him look a little like a kit. Kit like behaviour would take a while to leave Dazzlepaw, but he wasn't immature. He was sensible and respectful for the most part, he was sure of it. The pair were in a clearing today, which likely meant battle practise. Dazzlepaw's favourite. He never ever wanted to hurt anyone, but practising it was very fun.

A two in one lesson is what they would be doing today, starting off with some hunting. For Dazzlepaw, hunting came pretty easily. At least for the simple prey like mice. He hardly missed, especially because he tried to hard as seeing his mother's proud face was one of his favourite things. 

Falling into a hunting crouch was much easier for him now. It wasn't as swift or precise as a seasoned warrior, but compared to when he first started, in Dazzlepaw's eyes it felt much much easier. He parted his jaw to try pick up the mouse his mother had mentioned. For a moment he couldn't pick it up, and was about to complain to Clovershine until the musky smell finally hit. His eyes narrowed, and he stilled his body. His bright red pelt stood out insanely bad in the stark white snow, but there was nothing he could do about it. The mouse wouldn't notice anyway. Hopefully. Creeping forward, Dazzlepaw made sure each foot was placed down lightly, especially with the crunchy snow. His paws sunk into the soft white, but he made sure to walk extra slowly, so not a single sound would be made. He still never knew exactly how far he should go, and usually when he did miss, it was because he had creeped forward too far. This time at least he stopped before the mouse noticed him. A moment of silence and then he pounced, his teeth sinking into the nape of the mouse. It's warm blood seeped into Dazzlepaw's mouth and he felt the urge to eat it right then and there. He knew he couldn't though, and instead dropped it at his mother's feet. 

I play...

From WindClan
Aspenberry (F) an affectionate deputy
Rooknose (M) an awkward elder

From ShadowClan
Dazzlepaw (M) an energetic apprentice
Flutterdream (F) a friendly medicine cat
Muddykit (F) a troublesome kit
Pebbleshine (F) an insecure elder
Specklenose (NB) a graceless warrior

From ThunderClan
Cherrytree (F) a loving elder
Coyotepaw (F) an anxious apprentice
Larchsong (F) a chatty warrior

From RiverClan
Bloomfire (F) a snarky warrior
Ebonyflare (M) a candid elder

From beyond the clans
Aurelius (M) a self-concerned feral
Potato (M) a laid-back semi-feral
Sarafina (F) a skittish housecat


   
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XxBeewhiskerxX
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Posts: 327
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Even in the darkest shadows, there is always a glimmer of light. We just have to look for it.

✧・゚: *✧・゚:* 🍀 *:・゚✧*:・゚✧

The cream pointed she-cat's blue eyes lit up with pride as Dazzlepaw placed the mouse at her paws, his excitement radiating off him like sunlight reflecting on the snow, similarly to how his pelt looked... oh how he looked like his father. She thought her herself. But her thoughts were quickly snapped back to reality. She leaned down, giving his ear a soft lick. "What a good catch, Dazzlepaw" she purred, her voice warm and filled with love "Your crouch is looking much better, and you were patient with your pounce, that's not easy, especially in the snow. I can see how much you're improving"

Her gaze softened as she looked at him, her tail flicking lightly against his side as she moved past and shortly ahead of him burying the prey beneath the snow so other predators are less likely to find it, pressing her paw pad firmly against the snow to make sure it left a firm mark to remember where the prey would be. "You know, hunting isn't just about catching prey. It's about focus, control, and understanding your surroundings. You're getting there, and I'm impressed with how hard you try" she explained with a certain warmth that seemed to use quite often.

Straightening up Clovershine gestured towards a nearby clearing with her tail. "Now, let's work on some battle moves. I know how much you love practicing them, and I think you've earned the chance to show me how your skills have been developing on an actual opponent" she explained, spreading out her paws to a sturdy stance despite her lame paw that would normally unbalance her, it still does, but less if she concentrates on her balance. "Ready?"

Bee's Characters
FROM WINDCLAN
Beewhisker - ⚧ Chirpy Queen
Sunbear - ♀ Blunt Elder
Basilflame - ♀ Polite Warrior
FROM THUNDERCLAN
Greypebbles - ♂ Quiet Warrior
Robinkit - ♀ Cautious Kit
FROM SHADOWCLAN
Clovershine - ♀ Optimistic Warrior
Wolfkit - ♂ Odd kit
FROM RIVERCLAN
Goosesong - ♂ Stoic Warrior
Lilyriver - ♀ Independent Elder
OUTSIDERS
Duchess ♀ - Friendly Semi-Feral


   
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bookazuu
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Joined: 11 months ago
Posts: 403
 

'Mmm it's just a mouse, it's not that great but whatever' Dazzlepaw mused, but he clearly wasn't that bothered. As a whole Dazzlepaw didn't really get insecure, nor compare himself to others. Dazzlepaw was Dazzlepaw, and if he caught a mouse that was good. It meant someone wouldn't go hungry. He didn't think any of this though, for he was too distracted by a stray snowflake as it slowly drifted from atop a tree. A red paw flashed and the snowflake was batted away, his paw slamming to the group, leaving a significant paw shaped dent.

Dazzlepaw never really knew what to do with praise, but if it was something Clovershine said, he was sure it must be true. He flashed her a tiny smile before pressing his paw next to where she had pressed hers, his mark just a tiny bit smaller. Now both of them had marked the spot!

He had practised moves countless times, but they had never really done a mock battle before. He tried to think of all that Clovershine had taught him, but his brain felt so empty. Maybe the cold was getting to him. His mother was waiting for him to strike first but he didn't not what to do. He had to do something though. After a moment he ran to the side, before sharply turning and aiming to strike her stomach (with sheathed claws of course!). Just as his paws were about to strike Clovershine's stomach, he changed the course of one of his paws, hoping to knock her weak leg and send her off balance. Dazzlepaw didn't really know what he was doing. Just aiming for the weak spots was what he chose.  

I play...

From WindClan
Aspenberry (F) an affectionate deputy
Rooknose (M) an awkward elder

From ShadowClan
Dazzlepaw (M) an energetic apprentice
Flutterdream (F) a friendly medicine cat
Muddykit (F) a troublesome kit
Pebbleshine (F) an insecure elder
Specklenose (NB) a graceless warrior

From ThunderClan
Cherrytree (F) a loving elder
Coyotepaw (F) an anxious apprentice
Larchsong (F) a chatty warrior

From RiverClan
Bloomfire (F) a snarky warrior
Ebonyflare (M) a candid elder

From beyond the clans
Aurelius (M) a self-concerned feral
Potato (M) a laid-back semi-feral
Sarafina (F) a skittish housecat


   
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XxBeewhiskerxX
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Posts: 327
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Even in the darkest shadows, there is always a glimmer of light. We just have to look for it.

✧・゚: *✧・゚:* 🍀 *:・゚✧*:・゚✧

Clovershine had prepared for her leg to be the center of attention, as it was a weaker point for her, but she had live so long being a warrior that she placed majority of her defenses to her hind legs as well as the typical weaker more vulnerable areas while also making sure she was sturdy in her stance. Clovershine narrowed her eyes and leapt towards Dazzlepaw, narrowly avoiding the swipe at her leg and making a swift swipe to his shoulder with sheathed claws.

"Remember Dazzlepaw, other warriors will want to protect their balance, and going for back legs leaves you vulnerable to kicks, so you'll need to be more careful and quick when attacking a warrior's back legs" She explained, flicking her tail as she twitched her whiskers in amusement. "However, legs are not the only thing that can be attacked to knock a cat off balance, with a hard enough hit to a cat's side, you can knock them off balance just as effectively" she explained before pushing the red tabby with her nose on his side to knock him over.

With a light chuckle she stood over Dazzlepaw "Regardless though you're doing well" she added, a fond look in her bright blue eyes as she pushed a paw on her apprentices chest, her pads pressing on the slightly paler fur. "You're doing rather well regardless, but make sure that your strikes don't hinder your balance, one mistake could be deadly" she added

Bee's Characters
FROM WINDCLAN
Beewhisker - ⚧ Chirpy Queen
Sunbear - ♀ Blunt Elder
Basilflame - ♀ Polite Warrior
FROM THUNDERCLAN
Greypebbles - ♂ Quiet Warrior
Robinkit - ♀ Cautious Kit
FROM SHADOWCLAN
Clovershine - ♀ Optimistic Warrior
Wolfkit - ♂ Odd kit
FROM RIVERCLAN
Goosesong - ♂ Stoic Warrior
Lilyriver - ♀ Independent Elder
OUTSIDERS
Duchess ♀ - Friendly Semi-Feral


   
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