Silentwish

1 thought on “Silentwish”

1. Age: ‘age of -1 moons (-0.1 years)’ & ’Born in the Moon of Unnamed Blue (2021) : The age is currently showing as -1 moons because the moon you’ve selected

   Appearance:

   • moon-like white fur – This would be considered Pre-interpretive power play. You can’t tell other people how thier characters must interpret your character, only what traits you think will give this impression. More details about why we feel this is powerplaying and how to avoid it are HERE.
   • ominous, vibrant green eye and one beautiful sky blue eye – The words ‘ominous’ and ‘beautiful’ are also pre-interpretive powerplaying.
   • She looks somewhat ghostly on cold nights, especially in the mist. – More pre-interpretive powerplaying, but I’m sure you realized this on your own after checking out the link above.

   Personality: a mysterious she-cat – Pre-interpredtive power play.

   History:

   • Silentkit was thought to be a ghost, and many of the other kits would avoid her, fearing that she would find a way to harm them if they said something hurtful to her. – Unless you speak to the players of all characters who would have shared the nursery with Silentkit, this would be powerplaying because you’re making them both think and act a certain way. If they agree before approval that this would be accurate, this would be acceptable.
   • She was raised an orphan – Here an orphaned kitten would be adopted by someone who would be responsible for caring for them. In a sense they’d have an adoptive parrent.
   • Quailcall would – You’ll need freerangerage’s permission to use their character in your character sheet.
   • Many cats in the clan avoided her for fear that she was a ghost, as she was taken into the clan when she appeared out of nowhere on the territory one cold, misty night. – Powerplaying.
   • despite how much she was told to leave and but she was constantly told not to meddle in medicine cat knowledge and about StarClan, but no cat was willing to share their knowledge with her – Got to reach out to the player who would have been in the position when you figure out the age. I think it will be Kaz’s Fawnbriar, but I won’t be sure until the age is handled.
   • Disgusted by the way her Clanmates treated her, she began secretly sleeping outside of the nursery on the cold ground, hoping that somecat would care, but none every really did. – Powerplaying. I’m sure a number of players have characters who would have interfered with that.
   • she immediately began ignoring the orders given to her, bolting out of camp before her new mentor […] could even tell her to clean the elders’ ticks, which she’d probably be doing later anyways. After running for a long time, she began exploring the territory on her own – Apprentices, especially young ones would be in huge ammounts of trouble and have had their mentor (and likely other cats) trying to put a stop to that.
   • being sure to catch the mouse that she found nibbling some seeds underneath a tree – As they don’t have training, and have hardly been outside of the camp, I doubt this. Especially with how seperate from the other cats they would have potentially learned any pre-apprenticing skills from, and thus would have very little knowlege on that front.
   • Probably about a moon and a half later, Silentpaw was creeping through the bushes, her differently colored eyes glowing in the darkness as she leapt on top of the raven, slashing at its throat with her claws. – Not really a demand for change, more of a question about why it’s here? It dosen’t seem to bring anything to the history as it’s not really connected to any incident in her life, just a moment of hunting, which is very normal.
   • It truly was much better to sleep out in the territory instead of  in the stuffy ThunderClan dens – This behavior would be a thing that the leader would likely have addressed as it’s just not something a clan cat is expected to have done. I did verify this with the player of Moosestar, the Leader.
   • The happiness emanating from her Clanmates – Powerplay.
   • visiting the small river that marked the edge of the territory – The borders marked on our ThunderClan Territory Map only have a borders with the river at Sunningrocks. The sidestream is well wiithin the borders.
   • she would see a misty gray she-cat with green eyes on the other side, staring through her as though she wasn’t there – I am making the assumption that this is one of two things. If it’s a.) An actual apportition it wouldn’t be permitted in a cat. and if it’s b.) some sort of cat in another clan that they’re related to, it’s also not permitted unless the litter has happened “on camera” in role play.
   • but she shook the thought off. No cat could hear what she could, – Any sepcial powers would have to be arranged with the staff in advance and would not even be considered until you’ve been at the game awhile. This sort of thing would be a seriously major plot at least at the clan level, if not more.

   Mentor: Quaillcall – I already talked about needing to clear this with the other player.

   Notes, Public: She has a connection to the spirit world, and is of unknown origins. (I’m not changing the fact that she has a connection to a spirit world through the mist, got it?) – While I understand that you want this it simply is not permitted here. This would require an incredibly major plot to be developed with the staff to happen. It’s not impossible, but it’s just not an option to even consider at this time.

   Your character, as written, is well outside our rules. As some of the features of this character seem to be non-negotiable for this character concept I do suggest that you start from scratch and come back to this concept at a later time if a plot gets worked out as you get to know the staff and other players. This character might even be a better fit at another game.

   I do hope that you’ll go forward with another character concept designed in a way that is more in line with the CoSC Rules.

   Let me know if you have any questions.

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