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A Non-player Character played by XxBeewhiskerxX |
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 Name Blacknose
Affiliation Vitals
A Male cat who identifies Male.
By Unknown Sire out of Unknown Dam. Died in the Moon of Long Nights (2019) at the age of 64 moons (4.9 years) They have been dead for 14 moons (1.1 years) |
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Appearance Short Description : A lean seal point tom with bright amber eyes Long Description :
Blacknose’s pelt is mostly white, but had black fur climbing up his legs and tail with an almost completely black face with small specks of white across his muzzle making him a mostly white seal point feline. As his name suggests, his nose is as black as night and blends in perfectly with the fur on the majority of his face. The black on Blacknose’s face is also contrasted with bright amber eyes that tend to glow in the moonlight, especially after he had died and became one with StarClan. Blacknose is a lanky tom with a long tail, which to his friends, can make him look rather daunting at first, but his true personality shines through after speaking with him. |
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Personality Blacknose was a gentle and kind tom-cat, often going out of his way to help those who he believes are in need especially his friends and close kin. He tried his best to steer his child, Beewhisker on the right path despite their mother’s cruel teachings. To his relief his own teachings had steered Beewhisker to be a bubbly and fun loving feline so his attempts did no end in vain after his death. |
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History Key Dates :
Full History :
Blacknose, born in WindClan, grew up with a relatively normal and uneventful lifestyle, his dam raising him to be a respectful and selfless young tom, after being attacked by the small twoleg dog that broke one of his paws and gave him a few scars on his flank. His life was all and good in WindClan all until he met Tawnyflight. He knew that she was bad news but he was worried for his wellbeing if he did not follow her plans. So he agreed to sire her kit. And with that came Beekit, his pride and joy, Blacknose adored the sweet kitten and nurtured them more than even Tawnyflight did, his close friends often made light hearted jokes about Blacknose settling into the nursery with Beekit instead of Tawnyflight, which Blacknose seemed to welcome and almost encourage playfully but never gave in to being in the nursery, after his paw and wounds healed, he was devoted to his warrior duties. Though, as the moons passed, Blacknose noticed Tawnyflight attempt to alter their kit’s personality to match her own, and Blacknose did not nurture the idea at all, often playing small games with Beewhisker to keep their lively kit-like personality. However, his death was not one he had expected, while on a walk with Tawnyflight during a rainstorm, the topic of Beewhisker, Beepaw at the time was brought up and the conversation soon got heated. In a moment of anger, Tawnyflight attacked Blacknose, clawing at his pelt and latching her teeth onto his throat. After Blacknose’s body went limp Tawnyflight dropped his body into the gorge on WindClan’s side of the territory. Rushing back to camp, she proclaimed Blacknose’s death was toppling off of the gorge while chasing prey and due to the rainfall, it would wash away any scent tracing back to Tawnyflight even if the body was able to be found. Threads :
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Family Sire : Unknown Sire (For characters with an unknown father)
Dam : Unknown Dam (For characters with an unknown mother)
Offspring :
Beewhisker (A plump, long haired tortie and white nonbinary cat with pale blue eyes)
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Pedigree & Geneology Pedigree :
Family Tree : |
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Significant Cats Others : Mated with: Tawnyflight
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Additional Details Genetics :
This character has been assigned a genetic code.
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Notes Parent Pool : This character is a part of the Parent Pool.
Bans Data : Blacknose has been compiled into the bans records. Blacknose is a Male Cat with a White Pointed pelt of Mid-length Normal textured hair. They are of Medium Size and Semi-foreign build. Their eyes are Amber and ears are Normal. Their tail is Long, with Normal paws and Normal legs. They are of Non-purebred descent. Last Updated : 2024-09-07 01:01 |
Approved!
Appearance:
“muzzle making him a mostly seal point Siamese feline.” – I’d remove the ‘Siamese’ mention, as that would imply he has pureblooded Siamese in his bloodline, which would have to come elsewhere outside of the clans. You can remove the mention, and it would be fine.
Here we go!
APPEARANCE:
“Blacknose’s pelt is mostly white, but had black fur climbing up his legs and tail with an almost completely black face with small specks of white across his muzzle.” – It seems like you are describing a mostly white seal point (with dark extremities including face, feet, legs, and tail). Please specify if a seal point is what you’re going for.
“The black on Blacknose’s face is also contrasted with bright amber eyes that tend to glow in the moonlight, especially after his journey to StarClan.” – As far as I’m aware, eyes don’t do that after visiting Highstones.
“Blacknose is a lanky tom with a long tail, which to his friends, made him look rather daunting at first, but his true personality shines through after speaking with him.” – Powerplay. ‘CAN make’ ‘SEEMS like’ Don’t include other cats as definites unless they are you own or you get permission from their players.
HISTORY:
“Blacknose was born as a kittypet, but later joined WindClan due to him being in desperate need of care, after being attacked by the small twoleg dog that broke one of his paws and gave him a few scars on his flank. ” – Generally we prefer rogue born/kittypet born character to be two generations out due to their IC significance. So Blacknose’s sire/dam could be a kittypet, but not him specifically.
“However, his death was not one he had expected, while on a patrol with Tawnyflight, the topic of Beewhisker was brought up and the conversation soon got heated, evidently resulting in Tawnyflight losing her temper, taking out her fury on Blacknose. She had killed him and claimed it as a badger attack, and from then until Tawnyflight’s death not long after, she only became a worse version of herself.” – Killing a cat and then claiming it was a badger attack would be highly suspicious due to how the death would be investigated. Obviously there would be no scent proof of a badger. The body would be collected and a vigil would be held even if a body is mutilated, and the mutilations’ would not match those of a badger. Overall, it would be highly unlikely that Tawnyflight would get away with this crime and not be exiled.
This could be believable if she changed up her story and made it so a body couldn’t be collected. Maybe he slipped off the Windclan side of the gorge while chasing after prey and fell into the river below. Maybe it was during a rainstorm so the tracks from dragging the body and pushing it off the gorge wouldn’t be obvious and the blood scent would be washed away.
Until Beewhisker is through approvals, we won’t be able to ensure that everything matches up, so please re-submit once that approval is completed!