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Faux
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Who

Palestar & redpaw

What

Training Thread TW 20'

Where

Open lands near Ratfield

Day

17

Though my soul may set in darkness, it will rise in perfect light; I have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night
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The frost-crisped grass crunched faintly beneath Palestar's paws as she led Redpaw across the open plains. The leaf-bare chill hung in the air, nipping at her ears and nose, but the sun’s pale light did little to warm the frozen landscape. Despite the harsh conditions, she moved with practiced ease, her sharp odd colored eyes scanning the terrain for any sign of movement.

She glanced over her shoulder at Redpaw. Her long furred body paused near a slight rise in the ground, Palestar lowered herself into a crouch, her tail flicking lightly to signal Redpaw to join her. "This time of year is tough..." Her tone was somber as she recalled all the death of last leafbare, her voice low so as not to carry in the stillness. "Prey is precious and scarce, and anything we find will be extra cautious. But this is the perfect chance to sharpen your skills. Out here, every step and every sound matters."

Suddenly, an ear flicked towards a clump of dried grass...Would Redpaw be able to discern it from the quiet?


FROM RIVERCLAN:

Cottonbright, ♀ Anxious Warrior
Nettleplume, ♂ Cynical Medicine Cat
Merrypaw, ♀ Steadfast Apprentice
Otterwhisker, ♀ Adventurous Elder

FROM THUNDERCLAN:

Brindlespice, ♀ Selfish Warrior
Bravesong, ♂ Gracious Elder
Leopardrose, ♀ Striving Warrior
Wildcry, ♀ Fierce Elder
Rimekit, ♀ Rowdy kit

FROM WINDCLAN:

Cloudflare, ♂ Suave Warrior
Barleyswipe, ⚧ Ornery Elder
Heatherkit, ♀ Sweet Kit

FROM SHADOWCLAN:

Palestar, ♀ Stern Leader
Honeyglow, ♂ Reserved Elder
Emberdust, ♀ Artless Warrior
Duskpaw, ♂ Opportunistic Apprentice

FROM WHITEHART & BEYOND:

Ahryndae, ♀ Princess of Camelot

Lelouch Von Noon, ♂ Marquess of Noon Cattery

Kosmo, ♂ Visionary Feral
Montgomery (Monty), ♂ Sentimental Semi-Feral


   
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freerangerage
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Redpaw:

So this was the Leafbare that elders warned him about. Redpaw wasn't impressed. Sure, it was cold but prey couldn't be that much harder to find, right?

Padding alongside Palestar, he made sure to nod along - not quite sure where she was going with this. Test his skills... what skills? He mostly seemed to be religated to moss cleaning and tick duty.

Seeing his mentor's attention catch, he followed her gaze, dropping lower to the ground out of instinct.

"...What are we looking for?"  He glanced up at her, unable to identify exactly what it was they were now hunting.

 

Characters:
Coldgaze: (M) Ruthless Riverclan Deputy
Lawn Gnome: (F) Motherly Semi-Feral Shecat
Redpaw: (M) Thoughtful Shadowclan Apprentice
Sootbounce: (M) Bubbly Shadowclan Warrior
Sturgeonpaw: (M) Altruistic Riverclan Apprentice
Sunstrike: (F) Anxious Thunderclan Queen

NPCs:
Quailcall: (F) Fierce Thunderclan Warrior


   
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Though my soul may set in darkness, it will rise in perfect light; I have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night
✧ ⭒ ✧ ⭒ ✧ ⭒ ✧ ⭒ ✧

Palestar’s whiskers twitched with faint amusement at Redpaw’s uncertainty. His enthusiasm and rawness reminded her of her first days as an apprentice. "We’re looking for prey - and an oppertunity like this mouse. Smell it?" She motioned with her nose toward the faint quiver of the dried grass. "This will be small practice before the main event - You are crouching, good. Watch how it moves. You need to be just as slow and patient to catch it."

Head low and voice teasing the softest notes in the chilled air. "We are heading to the Forest's Edge to hunt rabbit. If we're lucky we can catch one in its burrow. They don’t sleep during leafbare, which makes them valuable prey - but they’re quick if they are out of their burrow."

Her gaze fell back to the young tom, her sharp odd eyes expectant. "But first, practice on this mouse. Distribute your weight evenly on your paws as you go and remember - patience." She nodded toward the grass, her tail-tip signaling him to begin as she stole a couple steps to the side, allowing him to make his own way like she had demonstrated before.


FROM RIVERCLAN:

Cottonbright, ♀ Anxious Warrior
Nettleplume, ♂ Cynical Medicine Cat
Merrypaw, ♀ Steadfast Apprentice
Otterwhisker, ♀ Adventurous Elder

FROM THUNDERCLAN:

Brindlespice, ♀ Selfish Warrior
Bravesong, ♂ Gracious Elder
Leopardrose, ♀ Striving Warrior
Wildcry, ♀ Fierce Elder
Rimekit, ♀ Rowdy kit

FROM WINDCLAN:

Cloudflare, ♂ Suave Warrior
Barleyswipe, ⚧ Ornery Elder
Heatherkit, ♀ Sweet Kit

FROM SHADOWCLAN:

Palestar, ♀ Stern Leader
Honeyglow, ♂ Reserved Elder
Emberdust, ♀ Artless Warrior
Duskpaw, ♂ Opportunistic Apprentice

FROM WHITEHART & BEYOND:

Ahryndae, ♀ Princess of Camelot

Lelouch Von Noon, ♂ Marquess of Noon Cattery

Kosmo, ♂ Visionary Feral
Montgomery (Monty), ♂ Sentimental Semi-Feral


   
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Redpaw scented, his body now tensed at Palestar’s explanation. “…No.” He admitted, his eyes flicking over the grass. “All I smell is… frost. Decay.” He looked at her – miffed. “My nose is frozen!” That was really the only explanation he had for why he was so bad at this.

Even if he couldn’t smell his prey, he could at least follow Palestar’s instructions. His weight shifted somewhat naturally and while his weight was well distributed his twitching tail would have given him away if he had been any closer to the mouse. Following her gaze revealed the slight shifting of the grasses and his eyes narrowed suspiciously. “How’d you know it’s a mouse?” He half-whispered, like the mouse could understand his questions.

Characters:
Coldgaze: (M) Ruthless Riverclan Deputy
Lawn Gnome: (F) Motherly Semi-Feral Shecat
Redpaw: (M) Thoughtful Shadowclan Apprentice
Sootbounce: (M) Bubbly Shadowclan Warrior
Sturgeonpaw: (M) Altruistic Riverclan Apprentice
Sunstrike: (F) Anxious Thunderclan Queen

NPCs:
Quailcall: (F) Fierce Thunderclan Warrior


   
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Though my soul may set in darkness, it will rise in perfect light; I have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night
✧ ⭒ ✧ ⭒ ✧ ⭒ ✧ ⭒ ✧

"Your nose will get used to it." With quiet reassurance, her voice steady and light, though her sharp gaze flicked to his twitching tail. She tucked her own tail tightly against her flank, a subtle reminder of what he needed to correct.

"To keep your nose warm, breathe through your mouth and exhale through your nose. It helps warm the air as it passes through. Try it - it’ll help you pick up scents, even in this frost." She demonstrated the action herself.

She shifted her attention briefly back to the mouse’s hiding spot in the grass. "As for knowing it’s a mouse…"Her whiskers twitched."I saw it scurry a moment ago into the grass. Rabbits move differently -  their steps are heavier and more spaced out. You’ll learn to spot the signs."

Her odd colored eyes met his, her voice dropping to a near whisper to match his. "Your crouch is good, but that tail of yours will give you away. Tuck it low, keep it still." She stepped quietly to the side, her posture relaxed but watchful, letting Redpaw have his moment to try.


FROM RIVERCLAN:

Cottonbright, ♀ Anxious Warrior
Nettleplume, ♂ Cynical Medicine Cat
Merrypaw, ♀ Steadfast Apprentice
Otterwhisker, ♀ Adventurous Elder

FROM THUNDERCLAN:

Brindlespice, ♀ Selfish Warrior
Bravesong, ♂ Gracious Elder
Leopardrose, ♀ Striving Warrior
Wildcry, ♀ Fierce Elder
Rimekit, ♀ Rowdy kit

FROM WINDCLAN:

Cloudflare, ♂ Suave Warrior
Barleyswipe, ⚧ Ornery Elder
Heatherkit, ♀ Sweet Kit

FROM SHADOWCLAN:

Palestar, ♀ Stern Leader
Honeyglow, ♂ Reserved Elder
Emberdust, ♀ Artless Warrior
Duskpaw, ♂ Opportunistic Apprentice

FROM WHITEHART & BEYOND:

Ahryndae, ♀ Princess of Camelot

Lelouch Von Noon, ♂ Marquess of Noon Cattery

Kosmo, ♂ Visionary Feral
Montgomery (Monty), ♂ Sentimental Semi-Feral


   
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freerangerage
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Redpaw's tail stilled as she mentioned it and he sunk lower onto his forelimbs. He has spent a long time sneaking out of the nursery after his siblings - this felt like a natural progression to those skills. Duskpaw had always been better at this sort of thing. But he was a little bit older than Redpaw and Dazzlepaw so really it wasn't all that surprising.

He hesitated, not sure if he should be the one to pounce. Surely Palestar was better at this? If she was worried about prey during this season (and it seemed everyone in the clan was) why was she letting him try to catch it? His ear flicked and he quietly waited for some sort of command or... something.

"Palestar, are you sure you want me to catch this?" His voice wasn't nervous - just confused.

Characters:
Coldgaze: (M) Ruthless Riverclan Deputy
Lawn Gnome: (F) Motherly Semi-Feral Shecat
Redpaw: (M) Thoughtful Shadowclan Apprentice
Sootbounce: (M) Bubbly Shadowclan Warrior
Sturgeonpaw: (M) Altruistic Riverclan Apprentice
Sunstrike: (F) Anxious Thunderclan Queen

NPCs:
Quailcall: (F) Fierce Thunderclan Warrior


   
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Though my soul may set in darkness, it will rise in perfect light; I have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night
✧ ⭒ ✧ ⭒ ✧ ⭒ ✧ ⭒ ✧

Palestar’s ears twitched, her whiskers lifting in somber amusement at his question. "Yes." Her voice was calm but firm. “I already know how to catch prey. This is about you learning. Whether you catch it or not, it’s the effort and the practice that matter."

Her gaze softened slightly, her tone encouraging. "Leafbare is harsh, yes, but we can’t afford to let that stop us from training our skills. Every warrior learns by trying, even if they don’t succeed at first. This is about preparing you for the future as well as feeding the clan."

She motioned toward the grass with a slow flick of her tail. “Trust yourself. You’ve got the stance and the patience - now put them to use. I’ll be here to help if you miss, but this is your moment." Her odd-colored eyes gleamed as she settled quietly to the side, letting him take the lead.


FROM RIVERCLAN:

Cottonbright, ♀ Anxious Warrior
Nettleplume, ♂ Cynical Medicine Cat
Merrypaw, ♀ Steadfast Apprentice
Otterwhisker, ♀ Adventurous Elder

FROM THUNDERCLAN:

Brindlespice, ♀ Selfish Warrior
Bravesong, ♂ Gracious Elder
Leopardrose, ♀ Striving Warrior
Wildcry, ♀ Fierce Elder
Rimekit, ♀ Rowdy kit

FROM WINDCLAN:

Cloudflare, ♂ Suave Warrior
Barleyswipe, ⚧ Ornery Elder
Heatherkit, ♀ Sweet Kit

FROM SHADOWCLAN:

Palestar, ♀ Stern Leader
Honeyglow, ♂ Reserved Elder
Emberdust, ♀ Artless Warrior
Duskpaw, ♂ Opportunistic Apprentice

FROM WHITEHART & BEYOND:

Ahryndae, ♀ Princess of Camelot

Lelouch Von Noon, ♂ Marquess of Noon Cattery

Kosmo, ♂ Visionary Feral
Montgomery (Monty), ♂ Sentimental Semi-Feral


   
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Well, this was going to be extra embarrassing if he missed it now. Redpaw turned away from his mentor and stared down the rustling patch of frozen reeds. He wasn’t all that big so he had to get this right the first time. Else his pounce would be ineffective, and the mouse would flee – or worse – burrow deeper into the snow.

He paused for a moment, looking back at his mentor again for some sort of reassurance (which he likely wasn't going to get until he actually did something) before making a ‘mrrp’ of frustration and committing. Redpaw's pounce landed only slightly shy of where he thought the mouse was. Yet, to his benefit, the creature chose to run rather than hide; its thick winter coat streaking out from under the crunched plants.

Characters:
Coldgaze: (M) Ruthless Riverclan Deputy
Lawn Gnome: (F) Motherly Semi-Feral Shecat
Redpaw: (M) Thoughtful Shadowclan Apprentice
Sootbounce: (M) Bubbly Shadowclan Warrior
Sturgeonpaw: (M) Altruistic Riverclan Apprentice
Sunstrike: (F) Anxious Thunderclan Queen

NPCs:
Quailcall: (F) Fierce Thunderclan Warrior


   
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Though my soul may set in darkness, it will rise in perfect light; I have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night
✧ ⭒ ✧ ⭒ ✧ ⭒ ✧ ⭒ ✧

Palestar’s eyes narrowed shrewdly as Redpaw’s pounce fell short, her eyes tracking the streak of motion darting away from the reeds. Her own muscles twitched, ready to intervene if the mouse veered too far out of reach, but she kept herself planted. This was his hunt, and he had to see it through.

"Mice zig zag to throw you off. Stay focused, and don’t hesitate." She hoped her encouragement would push him to take charge of the moment. Success or failure, this chase would teach him more than any lecture she could give. Eventually Palestar followed their trajectory, ready to help if needed.


FROM RIVERCLAN:

Cottonbright, ♀ Anxious Warrior
Nettleplume, ♂ Cynical Medicine Cat
Merrypaw, ♀ Steadfast Apprentice
Otterwhisker, ♀ Adventurous Elder

FROM THUNDERCLAN:

Brindlespice, ♀ Selfish Warrior
Bravesong, ♂ Gracious Elder
Leopardrose, ♀ Striving Warrior
Wildcry, ♀ Fierce Elder
Rimekit, ♀ Rowdy kit

FROM WINDCLAN:

Cloudflare, ♂ Suave Warrior
Barleyswipe, ⚧ Ornery Elder
Heatherkit, ♀ Sweet Kit

FROM SHADOWCLAN:

Palestar, ♀ Stern Leader
Honeyglow, ♂ Reserved Elder
Emberdust, ♀ Artless Warrior
Duskpaw, ♂ Opportunistic Apprentice

FROM WHITEHART & BEYOND:

Ahryndae, ♀ Princess of Camelot

Lelouch Von Noon, ♂ Marquess of Noon Cattery

Kosmo, ♂ Visionary Feral
Montgomery (Monty), ♂ Sentimental Semi-Feral


   
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freerangerage
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Don't hesitate - easy to say when you weren't the one chasing a fuzzy scrap of fur! Redpaw leaped off the reeds, and spent a few minutes watching the mouse with rapt attention, trying to predict where it would move next. His silent observation paid off as he lashed out - pinning the tiny rodent beneath his claws.

Both the mouse and the apprentice let out a squeak - of pain and surprise respectively. Redpaw stared over at Palestar, spooked into forgetting exactly the best way to go about dealing with the winded rodent.

"It's warm! And squishy!" He looked somewhat mortified, having never really dealt with 'live prey'. Only slightly warm 'fresh kill'.

Characters:
Coldgaze: (M) Ruthless Riverclan Deputy
Lawn Gnome: (F) Motherly Semi-Feral Shecat
Redpaw: (M) Thoughtful Shadowclan Apprentice
Sootbounce: (M) Bubbly Shadowclan Warrior
Sturgeonpaw: (M) Altruistic Riverclan Apprentice
Sunstrike: (F) Anxious Thunderclan Queen

NPCs:
Quailcall: (F) Fierce Thunderclan Warrior


   
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Topic starter  

Though my soul may set in darkness, it will rise in perfect light; I have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night
✧ ⭒ ✧ ⭒ ✧ ⭒ ✧ ⭒ ✧

Palestar approached her apprentice, her expression patient as she padded closer. "Yes. That’s how you know it’s fresh prey - something your clanmates will be grateful for tonight."

She crouched beside him and nodded toward the mouse, her gaze calm. "The life you take today will give life to many others. That’s the balance of the forest. You’ve already done the hard part, Redpaw. Now, finish it swiftly and with respect. It’s the kindest thing you can do for it - and it’s what StarClan expects of us."


FROM RIVERCLAN:

Cottonbright, ♀ Anxious Warrior
Nettleplume, ♂ Cynical Medicine Cat
Merrypaw, ♀ Steadfast Apprentice
Otterwhisker, ♀ Adventurous Elder

FROM THUNDERCLAN:

Brindlespice, ♀ Selfish Warrior
Bravesong, ♂ Gracious Elder
Leopardrose, ♀ Striving Warrior
Wildcry, ♀ Fierce Elder
Rimekit, ♀ Rowdy kit

FROM WINDCLAN:

Cloudflare, ♂ Suave Warrior
Barleyswipe, ⚧ Ornery Elder
Heatherkit, ♀ Sweet Kit

FROM SHADOWCLAN:

Palestar, ♀ Stern Leader
Honeyglow, ♂ Reserved Elder
Emberdust, ♀ Artless Warrior
Duskpaw, ♂ Opportunistic Apprentice

FROM WHITEHART & BEYOND:

Ahryndae, ♀ Princess of Camelot

Lelouch Von Noon, ♂ Marquess of Noon Cattery

Kosmo, ♂ Visionary Feral
Montgomery (Monty), ♂ Sentimental Semi-Feral


   
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freerangerage
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Redpaw stared down at the little mouse. The balance of the forest, huh? He didn't like that trade. Was this kill going to get a clan mate killed - if that's the logic on which this world worked.
 
"Do you think Hickorystorm would agree with you on that?" He didn't release the mouse, which had fallen limp - likely already bled out or gone into shock. His friend had been hunted and survived the encounter. Did Palestar think a swift death was preferable?
 
"I understand we have to hunt to survive. But I don't know of there is honour in death Palestar." He made sure the mouse was truly dead before picking it up.

Characters:
Coldgaze: (M) Ruthless Riverclan Deputy
Lawn Gnome: (F) Motherly Semi-Feral Shecat
Redpaw: (M) Thoughtful Shadowclan Apprentice
Sootbounce: (M) Bubbly Shadowclan Warrior
Sturgeonpaw: (M) Altruistic Riverclan Apprentice
Sunstrike: (F) Anxious Thunderclan Queen

NPCs:
Quailcall: (F) Fierce Thunderclan Warrior


   
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Faux
 Faux
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Topic starter  

Though my soul may set in darkness, it will rise in perfect light; I have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night
✧ ⭒ ✧ ⭒ ✧ ⭒ ✧ ⭒ ✧

Palestar’s ears flicked at Redpaw’s question, her gaze briefly shifting to the frosted grass before returning to him, thoughtful and steady. "Hickorystorm’s survival is a testament to his strength and StarClan’s will. His story is not the same as this mouse’s..." she began, her tone even but contemplative.

"There’s no honor in death itself, Redpaw. Honor lies in how we live."  She paused, her gaze softening as she crouched to his level. "This mouse didn’t have the chance to think about survival the way we do. It acts on instinct. It doesn’t weigh its choices or its future. That’s why it’s our duty to ensure its death isn’t wasted."

Her voice grew quieter, yet no less firm. "When we hunt, we honor the forest by taking only what we need. That’s the balance - not a trade, not a punishment, but a cycle... It’s okay to question these things, Redpaw. A good warrior doesn’t follow blindly. But it’s also important to understand that survival comes with difficult choices. You’ve done well today. Now lets go check out those burrows." The pale she-cat of her namesake picked up the mouse and buried it in the snow for later.


FROM RIVERCLAN:

Cottonbright, ♀ Anxious Warrior
Nettleplume, ♂ Cynical Medicine Cat
Merrypaw, ♀ Steadfast Apprentice
Otterwhisker, ♀ Adventurous Elder

FROM THUNDERCLAN:

Brindlespice, ♀ Selfish Warrior
Bravesong, ♂ Gracious Elder
Leopardrose, ♀ Striving Warrior
Wildcry, ♀ Fierce Elder
Rimekit, ♀ Rowdy kit

FROM WINDCLAN:

Cloudflare, ♂ Suave Warrior
Barleyswipe, ⚧ Ornery Elder
Heatherkit, ♀ Sweet Kit

FROM SHADOWCLAN:

Palestar, ♀ Stern Leader
Honeyglow, ♂ Reserved Elder
Emberdust, ♀ Artless Warrior
Duskpaw, ♂ Opportunistic Apprentice

FROM WHITEHART & BEYOND:

Ahryndae, ♀ Princess of Camelot

Lelouch Von Noon, ♂ Marquess of Noon Cattery

Kosmo, ♂ Visionary Feral
Montgomery (Monty), ♂ Sentimental Semi-Feral


   
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